Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO Re: Over the Next Hill -- FDK Reply #15 - Apr 19th, 2011 at 7:04pm Print Post Thanks, Normandie! It's nice to know I'm not as predictable as I think I am sometimes. Glad you're enjoying the story. The steamy part is in the chapter I'm writing now. Ooh-la-la! The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: Over the Next Hill -- FDK Reply #16 - Apr 19th, 2011 at 8:27pm Print Post Neesierie wrote on Apr 19th, 2011 at 7:04pm:The steamy part is in the chapter I'm writing now. Ooh-la-la! You really have a talent for understatement Denise! Now that was some sizzle! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO Re: Over the Next Hill -- FDK Reply #17 - Apr 20th, 2011 at 4:28am Print Post Thanks, Matt! All done now but the epilogue. And yes, there will be a sequel to this story. Stay tuned! The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: Over the Next Hill -- FDK Reply #18 - Apr 20th, 2011 at 4:00pm Print Post I knew Ed would be able to handle it, but I was concerned for a moment. Very romantic story. What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Librarian IAC Member Offline I may be blonde but... Posts: 658 Location: Washington (not DC) Re: Over the Next Hill -- FDK Reply #19 - Apr 20th, 2011 at 4:12pm Print Post I will say that I was surprised to see Johnny there - at least initially. I was expecting the aliens, though, seeing as they're never far from Ed's consciousness. So, we'll see the next part soon? And Miss Ealand calling the hospital on Straker - Oh boy... If you only have one solution to a problem - you're not trying. IP Logged
Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO Re: Over the Next Hill -- FDK Reply #20 - Apr 20th, 2011 at 4:39pm Print Post Hmmm. My beta tester didn't get the reference either. I think I'm going to have to go back and change that line to read: "His secretary, being no fool, immediately got on the phone to Col. Freeman at the hospital." I guess I can understand the reader forgetting. That was one story ago, after all (even though it's only been a few days in Earth time.) The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
Librarian IAC Member Offline I may be blonde but... Posts: 658 Location: Washington (not DC) Re: Over the Next Hill -- FDK Reply #21 - Apr 20th, 2011 at 4:54pm Print Post You're right - I forgot that Freeman was at the hospital. If you only have one solution to a problem - you're not trying. IP Logged
Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO Re: Over the Next Hill -- FDK Reply #22 - Apr 20th, 2011 at 8:39pm Print Post Well, I was wrong about the epilogue. It wanted to be another chapter. But at least the story is done! For now. I have BIG plans for the 3rd installment! *snicker* The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: Over the Next Hill -- FDK Reply #23 - Apr 20th, 2011 at 11:40pm Print Post Liked the new chapter Denise, I noticed the titile you liked in it. I was surprised at the regs against the C in C marrying, that's a departure from your normal MO. But this is another place and time. What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO Re: Over the Next Hill -- FDK Reply #24 - Apr 21st, 2011 at 2:15pm Print Post Actually, Matt, I've had him unable to marry a civilian before. So. What do you think about where this series is headed? The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: Over the Next Hill -- FDK Reply #25 - Apr 21st, 2011 at 9:48pm Print Post That's right you have, I forgot that Trishia was already military and Straker gave Jackson an ultimatum with Cait. I like where this is going. Careful this may turn into a saga! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged